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Name: Mr. Scratch*
Gender: Male
Species: Doppelgänger/Incarnation of Darkness
Height: 6'2"
Weight: ≈ 170 lbs
Age: ≈ 33 (1978)
Hair Color: Brown
Eye Color: Blue-Grey

Current Residence: Moving from hotel to motel to motel to hotel, occasionally stops in to the Dark Place
Occupation: Herald of Darkness, serial killer, making Alan's life as miserable as possible

Powers:

  • Well, a good hand for inflicting extensive body trauma and dismemberment isn't exactly a power, but with his favorite tools, there's something to be said for his work.

More notably, Mr. Scratch seems to possess many of the key abilities displayed by the Dark Presence.
  • Direct control over the Darkness.
    • Manipulating it like extra limbs, he's seen catching and dragging back someone who escapes from a room with him without ever moving, and again later wrapping it around someone's throat and pulling them out of a chair with it to hang them until dead.

    • Manipulating extremely heavy objects with this, including large machine parts and cars, often in the direction of throwing them at things.
      • He can also create 'poltergeists' of darkness with a similar ability, as they possess objects to throw them and can be destroyed in the process of manipulating them.

    • Producing swarms of Taken.

    • The ability to travel and move quickly through the darkness. He reduces himself to a sort of tangible cloud of darkness not completely unlike a large form of the poltergeists he creates. When he has somewhere to be expediently- this is the way to go. Also assists in avoiding pesky situations with things like police.


  • Touching people with Darkness. This has two affects:
    • Turning them into the 'Taken', the equivalent of rendering people into a zombie-minded shade of themselves, wrapped in darkness, often repeating clips and phrases of things that made them notably them in distorted voices. They lose the ability to understand basic concepts like manipulating objects like doors, guns, or anything more complex. They are highly sensitive to light, and cannot be injured without first having the darkness around them stripped away with light. There is nothing left to save of the people reduced to this state. There are different levels of Taken he can produce.

      • The Basic mindless, basic creatures with knives, hatchets, tire irons, fists and other weapons with minimal to no moving parts. There are variations, including larger, heavier Taken that hit harder and have higher defence.

        • Splitters, a subspecies of these that he can produce that starts as a a larger person with no darkness protection. They can be killed without the use of light, but targeting them with light will cause them to split into two smaller taken. These can then split again under the same methods.

      • The Assault Taken, more intelligent than their brethren that are capable of using items with moving parts and wield weapons like guns, grenades, and chainsaws. These are often faster and show some understanding of tactics.

      • Birds, as oddly enough, animal life can also be corrupted by the influence of the darkness, and swarms of birds make effective and evasive enemies. On top of this, there are 'Birdmen' Taken that can split into flocks of birds and back.

      • The Giants, a particular and very rare brand of Taken, overly large and near deformed in their titanic size and muscular structure. They wield concrete saws and are the hardest of all Taken to destroy.

    • The Touched- he can keep their minds mostly intact, just leave them extremely open and willing to his suggestion and choice personality adjustments. The darkness is much lighter around them and this can often be broken with an intense and constant enough light source, leaving the victim quite aware of their behavior and acts under his influence.

Weaknesses:
  • Light. Not a fan of bright light sources, though he won't be affected by flashlights / torches / etc any more than a normal human. Flash bangs and flares will make him recoil but won't destroy him. He can handle outside light in the real world in very small doses, and only because you'll note he only comes out on poor weather and overcast days and sticks to the shade. Understandably, he infinitely prefers to play the night owl. Intense lights can damage him, but you'll need a backup kick to finish the job before he retreats.

  • Ego. He's so full of himself the idea of losing in pretty much incomprehensible to him.

Personality Traits: exceptional charm, often remarked on by those he meets as well as his inevitable and sudden violent temper.

Series: Alan Wake, Alan Wake: American Nightmare
Character's role in their canon: antagonist
Point of canon to be drawn in: any time, any place. also will happily set up AUs.


* The reason he is named Mr. Scratch is because his name is unpronounceable by humans as it sounds just like a bunch of scratching noises. - Sam Lake, lead writer for Alan Wake

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Crime and punishment; the cancer and cure of civilization. But some crimes are impossible to punish... especially in Night Springs.
Tonight's episode: the "Man in the Mirror".


/The narration ends with the Night Springs logo and title card./

"He's inside agent. He's a weird one."

/We're inside a police room, an agent is sitting across from the suspect for questioning./
"So, you're confessing to killing that guy, huh? Why?"

"(laughing) Had it coming."

"Yeah, but why would you do that? I mean, you're a nice guy. Normal. Took your kid to his soccer game. So how come at the game you pick a guy and -- quoting from the arresting officer's report here -- 'assult the victim's head area repeatedly with the weapon of choice being a pair of bare fists'. Wow, that sentence really flows, huh?"

/The suspect is silent./

"Maybe you're not the literary type. Okay, so you mess him up. But why? Who was that guy? We couldn't ID him. Why would a guy like you do him like that? "

"I didn't like his face?"

"Well, you must've hated it, 'cause you really went to town there. I mean, there's no way to tell what he looked like. No ID on him, either."

"That must be difficult."

"But then we ran the fingerprints. Got a match: your prints. Identical."

"Huh. How about that?"

"Your son said you were wearing a white shirt when you took him to the game, but the white shirt is on the dead guy."

"It's plenty red now."

"You won't get away with this."

"Do you really think that's in any way relevant to me? I had plenty of time to talk to my boy before the cops arrived, you know. He won't stop screaming, am I right? You think he's ever gonna be okay? I left my mark, believe me."

/The agent pulls a gun, standing and pointing it at the suspect./
"You-- You bastard!"

"What? You're going to shoot me? What's the point? I'm going to prison. You got me."

/The agent lowers the gun./
"I... I don't understand any of this."

"And you never will."

/The agent is dazed and confused, remaining silent./

"Don't worry. Maybe you'll see me again, agent. Maybe in the mirror."

/The room door closes and the scene fades back to atmospheric background as narration takes back over./

The agent narrowly avoided becoming a monster, but has he gazed long enough into the abyss? Did he glimpse the heart of... Night Springs?
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"Don't mind him, he's Mr. Scratch. Your friends will meet him when you're gone."

-- Thomas Zane, Alan Wake


Zane: "The part of you that is in control is in the cabin, dreaming and insane."
Wake: "I don't think I like that."
Zane: "You represent the part of Alan Wake that is capable of rational thought and planning, which is why I'm talking to you. If that part can regain control, then you have a chance of making it. But a part of you wants to give in. There's... comfort in the oblivion of dreams. You represent the part that isn't ready to quit and die."
Wake: "Wait, are you telling me I'm not real?"
Zane: "You're as real as anything else in this place."
Wake: "So there are two of me?"
Zane: "Yes."
Wake: "And the one you called Mr. Scratch, he's me as well?"
Zane: "No."

-- Alan Wake: The Writer DLC



"He showed me a knife. And he kept talking. Quite liked the sound of his own voice." - Dr. Meadows
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Hunting Mr. Scratch
  • Mr. Scratch is a twisted copy of me, powerful and dangerous, but I know I can fight him. I don't think anyone else can. They don't understand what he is, what he represents, or that all the horrible things he does here are almost insignificant compared to what he will unleash on Earth, given the chance.

    But I have survived the Dark Place, and it has taught me things -- how to cope, how to stay sane when the world goes crazy. He's two steps ahead of me, but I can find him. And I believe I can stop him.

The Twisted Mirror
  • My own face peered back at me from the TV screen. For a moment, I struggled with the sensation of déjà vu -- how many times had I seen myself like this now?

    And then there was that easy grin that never seemed quite as quick or natural on my own lips, the dark, malicious twinkle in the eyes, and I knew who I was looking at.

    As he pulled back and revealed the room behind him, my throat went dry. There was nothing I could do but watch.

The Genesis of Mr. Scratch
  • I've seen the enemy, and it's me. I've faced dark horrors before, things that live in the unimaginable pressures of the world beyond our own. Sometimes they masquerade as humans.

    That's what ultimately lurks inside Mr. Scratch. He's every mean-spirited tabloid story about me, an evil caricature, a creature formed in that vague territory of misconceptions, half-truths, and the dark imagination of people who "heard a story about me". An urban legend made flesh. A serial killer.

    My dark half, brought to life by the power of Cauldron Lake.

The Appearance of Mr. Scratch
  • I'm trapped in the darkness. HE has started appearing to me. Mr. Scratch.

    He can travel back into the world effortlessly, and he loves to rub my face in it. At first, he was just an echo in the darkness, a flicker beyond the edge of my vision. Now he's started showing himself, getting bolder all the time. Telling me what a great time he's having in the world while I'm stuck here. And what he plans to do, especially to Alice.

    All the moves I have left are dangerous and desperate. I have no choice. I have to hunt him.

Cosmological Truth
  • There are places where our world is worn thin and another reality brushes against ours. One such site is Cauldron Lake near Bright Falls, Washington, but there are others.

    That other reality is dark, vast, and malleable, always in flux. In its depths dwell vast forces and alien energies. They are dangerous, but in one of these places, if you know how, you can channel the power of that place and use it to shape reality.

The Taken
  • The Taken may well be the tool the darkness favors over any other. At some point, they used to be human, but whatever humanity they once had is long gone. Now they're just shells covered and filled by darkness.

    The Taken Mr. Scratch throws at me are more grotesque and varied than the ones I first encountered in Bright Falls, but I know how to deal with them. I'd be lying if I said they don't frighten me, but I have survived worse. I can't let them stop me.

The Doppelgänger
  • It's obvious that for all his power, Mr. Scratch is an agent of another, greater being. The Dark Place he came from is full of terrible alien intelligences, dark presences, and none of them should be let loose in our world. He serves one of them. He'll open the way for them if I don't stop him.

    But he'll do more: he'll take over my life. He already has my face; he already uses my name. He'll become Alan Wake in every way imaginable and corrupt everything... unless I can stop this.

Mr. Scratch's Trap
  • The trap Mr. Scratch has set for me is as simple as it is impossible: whenever I reach him, he sends me back to the beginning of the maze. It's a loop in time; I go through it only to end up where I started. There's a brutal genius to it. If I die, it's over for me; if I survive, I end up where I started. Sooner or later, the odds will catch up with me, and in the meantime, he gets to toy with me...

    But that's why I have a chance. He's caught in this pattern just as much as I am. I know where he'll be, and I'm prepared.

The Plan
  • I have created the weapon that can put an end to this, a blueprint to a new reality. All I have to do is survive long enough to use it.

    My arrival from the Dark Place will be painful and difficult. These pages may be lost, but one way or another, I'll send the parts I really need to myself. If I make it outside, I have a chance.

    Mr. Scratch is more powerful than I am, but he can't change the rules in the middle of the game. He's not a creator, I am.

Emma and Mr. Scratch
  • Emma wasn't sure exactly when the mare arrived at the motel, but from what she could tell, the party started almost immediately. It was infectious, spreading from one room to another. He was mercurial, almost as if he was flickering through the scene, telling a joke here, throwing an insult there, oozing sex and violence and excitement.

    She had never seen someone like this before. He looked at her and smiled, and she felt her heart flutter a little.

    She knew he was the kind of a man mothers warned their daughters about, but she told herself it didn't matter.

Dr. Meadows and Mr. Scratch
  • The man before Dr. Meadows was handsome and slick. He moved with lazy confidence and didn't bother to pretend that he wasn't staring at her. She didn't mind, at first.

    Then the man flicked open the knife and shoved her out of the control room so she wouldn't hear the signal -- whatever it was. Outside, she pulled her lab coat closed and thought about running. She didn't. She didn't think she'd get very far, not from him.

    She never was entirely sure why he spared her.

Serena and Mr. Scratch
  • When the dark man's eyes suddenly locked into Serena's, she flushed hot. They ignited a black fire in her.

    He was talking: he wanted the power turned off. He said something about the protector booth. She hooked a finger under his belt buckle. He grabbed a hold of her throat and twisted until it hurt. Somewhere deep inside, a part of her screamed in paralysed horror, but the moan that escaped her throat had no panic in it.

    "Pay attention," he said. "Business first." His eyes glittered shamelessly. Hers did, too.
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Is this on? (protesting muffled noises)
How can you tell? (background hyperventilating)
I'm sorry, I'm not very good with gadgets. (muffled sobs, soft sounds of recorder being moved)
Ahhh! THAT'S more like it!

(the sound of moving away from the recorder)
(panicked noises of fear, struggling)
I'll be right with you. I've just gotta do this one thing.
(panicked, muffled noises of fear and protest)
(sharp noise of cloth, the panicked noises increase)
I like it quiet.
(the muffled noises quiet, but there's heavy breathing instead)

I'm bet you're wondering why this happening. Why am I doing all this, why am I so hell-bent on ruining your life? (sigh) You're cramping my style. You've got money, fame, everything you could want but you don't know what to do with it! I do! I'm getting all the things you never had the balls to go for. Having more fun, too! (small laugh)

(muffled sob)
Do you know the real difference between us? I'm not afraid to be the center of attention!

(muffled groans of protest)
This poor slob's just collateral damage, really. I mean, I beat some information out of him earlier. But this part?
(moving away from the recorder again, there's a startled noise and more protesting grunts)
This is just for kicks.

(grunt of exertion on Mr. Scratch's behalf, frantic struggling and grunts from the other person while Mr. Scratch chuckles. This goes on until there's the sound of something heavy toppling)
(silence)
(soft footsteps, shift of fabric, near the recorder again)
Mmmmmmm. So quiet.
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(faint noises of a party in the background)
Heeey buddy! I figured I'd take a moment to talk to ya. There's a party next door. I'm feeling pretty good right now! A little beer, a little fun, you know. It's... nice!
Listen, this whole thing between us. It's a little weird for me too, you know? I mean, we don't just look the same, there's a lot we share. I mean, up here. I know you, right? So I was thinking maybe would could-(odd, low electrical hum)

(the people in the party get louder, but it's still muffled)
(soft scuff of footsteps away from the recorder, a pause, and then they come closer again)
(sigh/scoff) These guys are getting out of control.
(just the noise of the party)

Look (sigh) I feel like we're both victims of circumstance here and maybe we could make some kind of effort t-(faint pounding on the wall)
(the party gets even louder, people are whistling and cheering)
(silence except for the party, then soft footsteps and a loud clattering, a soft telephone chime)
(only the party can be heard for a long moment)
Nevermind.

(a door opens a shut, the party continues in the background)
(after a few moments, there's muffled knocking on a door that sounds further down)
(a loud grunt, a brief struggle, and the sound of something heavy hits the floor)
(the noises of the party turns to screaming)
(Mr. Scratch laughs in delight)
(noises of struggle, a male groaning, blows connecting)

/feed ends./
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(there's music playing- Poets of the Fall - Happy Song.)
(I told you I'm a psycho. Really, I'm a psycho)
(Mr. Scratch is vocalizing a percussive beat along with the song)
(Mr. Scratch trills, laughs as the song continues)

(strained cough, low groan, soft grunts of pained exertion)
(clatter)
(Mr. Scratch resumes his percussive vocalizing, laughing)

/feed ends./
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(An episode of Night Springs is starting in the background)
(Mr. Scratch is speaking in an excited, hushed voice)
Okay. So this chick just came up to me and said she's my biggest fan. (hushed laughing tone) I know! They all say that, right?! And she's giving me the eye so I make a couple of moves, we have a couple of drinks and then things start happening. (hushed laughing tone) But I say I have to go to the bathroom first. Uh-oh! Right?? (quiet laugh) She's got no idea! Watch this! This is gonna be priceless! (quiet laugh)

(shift of fabric)
(scuff of feet walking away from recorder)
(Mr. Scratch moans)
(young woman moans)

(Woman) Mm, that's nice.
(Mr. Scratch) I thought you'd like that. ... Are you tense? You feel a little tense.
(Woman) Maybe a little. I had a crappy day.
(Mr. Scratch) Yeah?
(Woman) Don't worry, it's improving real fast.
(Mr. Scratch) (agreeing, laughing) Yeah!
(soft sound of scraping metal)
(Woman) Hey, don't stop, it was just getting good.

(Mr. Scratch whispers)
Watch this!

(fleshy, visceral noise like wet meat being cut open)
(muted screaming on the TV)
(choking/gurgling noise)
(Mr. Scratch imitates the gurgling noises, then starts laughing)
YEAHH!!! Did you see that?! OH MAN. Did you see her?! BOOOM! heh heh heh.
[Night Springs is narrating: It's imagination, more than anything else, that sets us apart from animals. It's in our nature to imagine, to turn fantasies into legends. To be storytellers, but on a rare occasion, the line between fact and fiction, imagination and reality, becomes hopelessly blurred and no where as vividly as in... Night Springs.]
(laughs again, sighs between laughs)
(sighs and pants, sighs in satisfaction)
(Mr. Scratch falls silent as Night Springs continues and ends its narration.)
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I know what you're thinking. Evil Twin. Supernatural Powers. But most of the time, I just like to keep things basic. I want you to understand that.

/turns the recorder away/
[weapons are neatly laid out:
gardening shears, ??, ?? straight razor, switch blade, ice pick, hatchet, knife in a leather sheath, kitchen knife, battery operated drill, hammer, hand gun, pliers, duct tape, hand saw, new roll of duct tape]

/picks up a hammer/
Like this. Need to get your hands dirty? No batteries, no moving parts. Just physics. That's technology you can depend on. It's a classic.

Speaking of classics!
/picks up a straight razor/
You need to be careful with this one, though. If the victim suddenly twists, you might end up cutting yourself. It's not really a work horse, but... I'm a sucker for the style.

Now this is more like it.
/picks up a switch blade, flicking it open/
You've got slip-resistant grip. Believe me, you really want that traction once you're wrist-deep in somebody. The blade's stiff enough so it won't open by accident in your pocket but it's still really easy to open with just one hand. Now that's a big thing for me.

(almost chiding tone)
I know what you're thinking.
/picks up a combat knife/
It's too big! Too heavy. But sometimes you just need the extra... oomph. If you're talking intimidation, this... is gonna do the job. Also great for dismemberings and whatnot, you know. The messy jobs.

(revelating noise)
Ahh!
/picks up a mostly-used roll of duct tape/
I can't tell you how many things I've McGuyvered with this stuff.

Okay.
/motions to the gun but does not pick it up/
Now, guns. Not a big fan. I mean, how are you supposed to really connect with somebody with a bullet?

/turns the recorder back to himself/
I want you to understand that. I take pride in what I do. We can't both be worthless hacks can we?
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I wanna talk about Alice. Just look at her. She's really beautiful, isn't she? Your wife. Well, our wife, really. (soft laugh) Just my wife, soon.
(car alarm goes off in the distance)
Don't worry! I'm not going to treat her like the others. She's special! (car alarm stops) If I wanted her dead, she would be. I've been around for awhile now.

(long pause, then a sigh)
So talented.
(rustle of papers)
You haven't seen her new work, of course. Oh! It takes my breath away. Really! She's that good.

(rumbling/roar noise in the background. large vehicle? wind? it continues periodically until the end of the feed.)
(scoffs)
Did you know that I've got a wedding ring, too? We're that similar! She's seen me a couple times, you know. I've let her catch glimpses. She thinks she's imagining things, of course. She thinks you're dead. You might as well be, I mean, even if you manage to keep surviving, you'll be in my trap forever. So I'll go to her. It'll be an amazing moment.

(falsetto) Oh my god. You're alive!

I'll be the good, loving husband for as long as I can stand it. She'll love it.
And then? One day. Somehow. It'll happen. Maybe I'll slip up, she spots something, or... maybe she just starts running her mouth. And then, I'll do it.
(pauses) It's gonna be sweet. (amused huff)

(sighs)
Ahh. My darling wife.
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So I've been thinking about Barry. I don't know what to do about him yet. I mean, I'm not going to keep him around, that's for sure. (abrasive tone) "Al! AL!" (disgusted) Uhg! Little parasite! Your best friend. (criticising) Reeeeeaaaally. That's the best you can do?

(muffled sound of dog barking)
(clink of ice in glass)
I actually kind of like the guy. (mocking baby talk) He's a plucky little butterball. (normal voice) He plays the clown, that's a hard road to take. Hmph. (angrily, getting closer to the recorder) But I don't need him sticking his fffat ffface in my business.

(retreats, sighs heavily)
Did you know he's been hanging out with the sheriff? From that shitty little town? They keep in touch. Barry's about the only guy who insists that you're not dead. How about that.

(sigh)
(muffled sound of dog barking)
(shift of fabric)
(chair creaks)
(sighs again)

I might keep him alive for awhile.
(pause, scoff)
Just to see him go to pieces when I fire his ass!
(laughs)
eeyeeeah. eeyup.
(sips drink, swallows)
yeaaaaaah.
(amused huff)
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This is what you look like. Does that bother you? I bet it does. (sigh) I'm not just wearing your face, you know, I goes a lot deeper than that. There's aloooootta you in me- all the best parts.

At first, I was just an idea... but they kept telling all those stories about you. You already had that rep. (chair creaks) And then you disappeared mysteriously... and then the stories about baaad, crazy Alan Wake came true... and here I am! That's the best part, isn't it? When that happens! You can always count on Cauldron Lake.

(sigh)
(chair creaks)
(footsteps away from the recorder)
I'm just as real as you are... and I'm the improved version! No fears, no doubt, no weaknesses, no self deceptions here. I don't let anything drag me down!

(footsteps towards the recorder again)
I know you like I know myself. I know it bothers you that I'm like this, that I use your name, crawl my way into your life. But I only do it because... I'm better at being you than you EVER were!
(footsteps recede)
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I've been around for awhile now, you know? While you've been... indisposed? Stuck in the darkness? I've been busy. I operate in the shadows. Not always literally, you understand. I'm a little more... resilient than those I've taken. But I do my best work in the dark.

(moving away from recorder, deep sigh)
(increasingly manic) And there's so much darkness out there! And it goes deeeep and the things that live in it are vaaast, BIG bastards!

(sighs, recovering)
They don't mind getting a little bit of elbow room! (sigh) All that chaos and madness, it doesn't really do that much down there! It's like pouring a glass of water into the ocean, right?
(shift of fabric)
But up here? Yeeeaaah. You can really make an impact.
(bed creaks as he sits)
(sighs)

All they need is someone to bring them all the way through. But first? I had to take care of you. You party-pooper. You're stuck in an eternal cycle now. The sun's never coming up for you.
(bed creaks as he gets up)

Everything else? Doin' my thing? Getting a bit of quality time with Alice?
(imitates Hannibal Lecter, sucking in through his teeth)
That's a little something for me. And I deserve it.

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